Post by roxstar on Jan 30, 2009 1:55:55 GMT -5
Alright, well I'm not sure if anybody know what they're talking about. Except maybe Andrew, it's pretty understandable that he wouldn't want to tell anybody...
I do Day Game 5 hours a day, every day. I've written posts longer than all your posts combined, and the length of the phases don't really matter if you do it my way.
I agree with it being different - but it's harder in some areas, and easier in others.
Comedic - your opener, no offense, kind of sucks... It could actually work, but I know something a lot more effective. You're being a pussy right off the bat and apologizing for being in her presence. I like the damn cute part... That's about it.
God, I don't want to have to write all this shit out again... I just did it this morning. And I don't want to copy and paste it.
Yeah, I'm a little cranky right now... I'm gonna make myself a PBJ sandwich.
I'm also writing a book. My book has a good chance of being sponsored by a few companies... Which mean it will have a very nice surprise for all of you... I'll write a formal post on this that looks like Sales Copy
It might be several books - covering different topics. And the master guide will be separate, which will probably have bonuses that come along with it. It will all be about Day Game, or things that would be an asset in Day Game.
Lol, that's enough plugging. I'm going to go watch a movie, and relax.
RS.
I do Day Game 5 hours a day, every day. I've written posts longer than all your posts combined, and the length of the phases don't really matter if you do it my way.
I agree with it being different - but it's harder in some areas, and easier in others.
Comedic - your opener, no offense, kind of sucks... It could actually work, but I know something a lot more effective. You're being a pussy right off the bat and apologizing for being in her presence. I like the damn cute part... That's about it.
God, I don't want to have to write all this shit out again... I just did it this morning. And I don't want to copy and paste it.
Yeah, I'm a little cranky right now... I'm gonna make myself a PBJ sandwich.
I'm also writing a book. My book has a good chance of being sponsored by a few companies... Which mean it will have a very nice surprise for all of you... I'll write a formal post on this that looks like Sales Copy
It might be several books - covering different topics. And the master guide will be separate, which will probably have bonuses that come along with it. It will all be about Day Game, or things that would be an asset in Day Game.
Lol, that's enough plugging. I'm going to go watch a movie, and relax.
RS.
