Analyze this convo? what's missing?

[Sloth]

1. ONLINE GAME IS NOT A BIG PART OF IMPROVING YOUR GAME YOU TOOL
2 it wasn't dead
3 that wasn't good at all, you just came off as hyper and weird, and the bit where you asked if you woulda been invited was hella lame.

honestly i can't even begin to tell you what to do, you need to read up for yourself.. just read some material and use it, then start actually going natural.

[qaz]

The end part of that was much better than the beginning

[looknlisten]

Yup, not the best, this is a testament to wankers how much game is required to pull and how much easier shit is if she's receptive. This texting is a reflection of who you are and I must say your lacking .. You don't sound authentic you sound try hard. All products of not feeling your enough, that's the key and you need to unlock it, simple

[Michal]

As sloth said...and one more -> Never write more than one message like this->
OOOh
yeaah
how are you
but everytime in 1 message->Oh,yeah ,how are you?
And when its not ultra needy never write much more bigger message than girl.
Btw. this conversation looks like you were replying after 1 minute and she was replying maybe after 5-10 mins. Never reply earlier than girl,when she replies after 5 mins,you must reply after 7 understood?

[RMO]

every thread like this needs to die

[Michal]

with bots in the same hell

[def454]

sloth, i think you've confused his messages for hers- she is sami and he is d. She asked HIM if she would be invited which is asking for him to qualify her- good sign, an a wasted opportunity when you give a weak reply like- "yeah you would have"

possible responses:
"i don't know, you kinda cramp my style"
"only if you brought a gift"
"no"
"hell no"
"definitely not"
"no grenades aloud, sorry"--->reserve stuff like this for confident girls only.

you see a theme here? david deangelo has always said "never give a girl a straight answer, unless it's no"- obviously an exaggeration, but use your judgement and apply it, especially when texting or chatting online.

she literally ASKS you to tease her in a moment like that and many others throughout. it's the way she talks to guys she is considering hooking up with, your responses basically dictate whether u get her or end up in the friend zone.

her--->" theres a whole wikipedia article about harry potter spells, its ballin"

you--->"theres a whole wikipedia article related to geeks too, youre picture is at the top, you're ballin'

or...

you: this is what you spend yor time looking up?
-----

her: trying to leave the family this weekend and hang out with some friends
you: great plan, you need to find some friends first though, i'll be your first-#####- text me

---yest the "i'll be your first" line is sexual in nature, don't bring that up to her, let her figure it out on her own, if she calls you out on it u say something like- wow, here i am giving out my number to a pervert, you better not start sending me drunken booty calls at 3 in the morning...

giving your number to her is sometimes better than vice-versa, if she texts u then you KNOW shes into it, if she doesn't, she probably isnt but u can try for a bit longer and get hers later on.

dont overdo it with the teasing responses though, a lot of guys come into this reading about "negs" and use them as a crutch in the beginnign with some success, but they get bolder and more confident and make their "negs" meaner and more frequent thinking- MORE NEGS MORE POON, YEAAAAH im socool now...- but that isnt the case,there is a time and a place. trust me, there are people who insult girls into getting with them and there are those who shower them with compliments until they get with them, and everything in between.just improvise and be yourself and not a lame version of yourself.

I tease constantly and a good trick i learned early on is to focus on what SHE is saying and not what you should say, this will keep you out of your head and focused on the moment and you will think of better thing to say, and the conversation will flow better because everything you say will be an extension of what she said. you wont tease too much OR be boring because u will understand the dynamic of the conversation

basically here is a map of both ways of thinking

your current, boring model, thinking of to say next:

her: "theres a whole page related to hary potter spells"
your brain: shit i dont care about harry potter, what should i say, i got nothing,
acual response: uhh no..thank you for enlightening me
your brain: nice word bro "enlightened"

the "i'm a boss, i wanna hear what this girl has to say" method-

Her: harry potter bla bla
your brain: why is she looking up harry potter, why does she care about SPELLS? this girl is a geek, and we have to call her out on it...
actual response: i can't imagine why anyone would know that... did you just get into wizard school or something?

obviously u can say anything but u get what im trying to say. try to put these into play and let me know how it goes, good luck.

[iamwonton]

My convos with people are usuually never this bad. But what I'm gettiing is that brevity and some level of tease is what I'm going for?

[qaz]

@def

Dec 6, 2011 18:52:00 GMT -5 iamwonton said:

I'm Sami, and she's D

[Amb1valence]

Yeahhh def you got it twisted, he's Sami and the girl is D.

Idk honestly I didn't think it was bad. She just seems like a pretty chill, authentic girl, not like most ditzy girls out there which is fine. And if you were being authentic too, then you were good. So I thought it was ok but I guess if you guys say it's bad then that shows how much I know about online game lol.

[jae]

1)Be authentic.
2)Aim to keep your messages shorter than hers.
3)Have fun.

[Sloth]

get out into THE REAL WORLD and do this shit...

[jjunius9]

What the fuck is the language you are using on this text though? brola? seriously? I dont know, maybe it's just me, but I like to text in full, grammatically correct sentences. Girls notice it too, they like it.

[jae]

lolwut? who txts with grammar g? homos, thats who.

[amarok]

Jae, have you read any of the texting guides here? Read those and look at some field reports of pros here with text in them. If you didn't know better you'd think it was IM. Full grammar makes you easier to understand and makes you come off as altogether better to the girl.