first scene of AMERICAN PULP

[RMO]

So ive been working on a variety of screenplays of late and I think i hit gold with my last idea. If any of you have read pulp magazines, or any form of pulp literature, the sytle is very intriguing and unique. Usually it is held in the 30's and 50' sense, but i wanted a modern retelling of pulp, so ive been working on script for a movie loosely based around one circumstance but there are different narrators and it is not necessarily in chronological order.

I'm posting the first scene, which is its own story arc, and i want to see if you guys have an opinion's. Also any story ideas you want to be made into screen play's I can do.
www.scribd.com/doc/26460361/American-Pulp-Scene-1

[daisyallen]

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[RMO]

what?