crash
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Nov 5, 2008 19:29:46 GMT -5
Post by crash on Nov 5, 2008 19:29:46 GMT -5
So I've never been an amazing lyricist. I recently (and by recently I mean a year ago but I lost them then found them) and was hoping for some feedback. Also, if anyone else would like feedback post yours and I'll be glad to help out . Also, free internet to the person who figures out what it's about. Lyrics: They have control Of it all But that won't stop you You break the law You try to stall But they won't give up You never knew Just what you'd do 'Til she came into your life They caught you Now what to do No one ever Escapes Now you're done Your time has come They tell you come to 101 Behind that door On the floor Your worst fear awaits you They bring you in Strap you down You look around but it's bare You hear them screech You hear them reach As he watches you Big Brother Is watching you Big Brother Sees all you do You see their lies You see them try But none of it is true Rockets fly People die Theres nothing you can do Goldstein's book Made you look For answers that are not there The painting falls They see it all They are now watching you Big Brother Is watching you Big Brother Sees all you do Big Brother Is watching you Big Brother Sees all you do They have control Of it all But that won't stop you
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Zomga48
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Nov 5, 2008 19:38:26 GMT -5
Post by Zomga48 on Nov 5, 2008 19:38:26 GMT -5
1984, when Winston and the girl (her name escapes me atm) get caught and are brainwashed.
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crash
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Nov 5, 2008 19:54:05 GMT -5
Post by crash on Nov 5, 2008 19:54:05 GMT -5
1 free internet to zomega
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Zomga48
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Nov 5, 2008 20:01:57 GMT -5
Post by Zomga48 on Nov 5, 2008 20:01:57 GMT -5
Yay..it's Zomga, but woah, Zomega sounds cooler haha.
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crash
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Nov 5, 2008 21:15:23 GMT -5
Post by crash on Nov 5, 2008 21:15:23 GMT -5
Why is it every time I miss say/type someones name it just comes out more awesome Any feedback on the actual lyrics?
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Luc
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Nov 5, 2008 21:32:30 GMT -5
Post by Luc on Nov 5, 2008 21:32:30 GMT -5
hey i like em i was just about to say that it was 1984, good book
right now me and the singer for my band are writing a concept album w/ generally the same idea.
Do you have music to these lyrics? I always find it's a lot harder to write music to lyrics than lyrics to music.
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crash
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Nov 5, 2008 21:58:37 GMT -5
Post by crash on Nov 5, 2008 21:58:37 GMT -5
I had music once, lost it though
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