bballphenom
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Post by bballphenom on Sept 19, 2011 19:32:45 GMT -5
So I'm moving soon across the country, and we had to write a poem about anything we want. There's this girl in my class that I've been talking to for awhile. So I wrote the poem for her...
Moving far away
From .........
Girl I'm going to miss you
Wish we had more time
But I got to go
And I leave you with this rhyme
I always did like you
Through our ups and downs
We had our smiles and frowns
Our sun and rain
Liked you enough
To go through some pain
I hope you never forget
And all the times we had I will never regret
I'm really going to miss you
But glad I got to kiss you
Never forget your name
I hope you do the same
You were the closest thing to perfect
All the time we spent
Every minute was worth it...
I asked her if she would proof read it and she started crying in front of everyone in class and made me feel really sad.
She told me she wants me to be her first, so after school we hung out and hooked up. Kind of regretting taking her virginity since I'm leaving. ..
Today was a really GOOD day, and also a really SAD day cause I'm going to miss her...
Any advice??
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infamous93
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Post by infamous93 on Sept 19, 2011 19:35:13 GMT -5
Dude that sucks........ I'm sorry
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Adam
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Post by Adam on Sept 19, 2011 21:42:11 GMT -5
Fist off that was a great poem.
Either you go with a long distance relationship or you move on. You had your time with her.
Remember don't cry cause its over smile cause it happened.
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auroturtle
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Post by auroturtle on Sept 19, 2011 21:58:19 GMT -5
Dude that sucks........ I'm sorry lol wtf? this was pretty sweet, hats off to you |
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perceverance
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Post by perceverance on Sept 20, 2011 3:10:20 GMT -5
good stuff my man. sometimes you just gotta let things go. i know its easier said than done but its the only advice i got for you bro.
respect to you for writing that poem and being able to express your feelings as well, thats what makes you a real man to the core.
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Adam
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Post by Adam on Sept 20, 2011 6:43:16 GMT -5
I think infamous was talking about his situation not the poem
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theory
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Post by theory on Sept 20, 2011 9:00:24 GMT -5
nice poem, if you think its worth it go long distance, I would personally advise just letting go, its a good thing that it happened because now you will have the memories though  |
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Post by looknlisten on Sept 20, 2011 12:38:41 GMT -5
being able to express your feelings as well, thats what makes you a real man to the core. no not really.. The poem was okay ey, maybe when spoken its more deep .. Change is good though, and you got laid, nice |
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Amb1valence
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Post by Amb1valence on Sept 20, 2011 14:12:00 GMT -5
hahahahahhahaha...oh my god holy shit I feel bad for laughing since you're somber about it. But idk that was fucking hilarious to me for some reason...I think I just pictured her breaking down in front of the class and then like jumping on you and being like "BEAR MY CHILDREN"..it wasn't funny until you were like, "..so we went home and hooked up." LOL
Yeah but so anyways..with your problem. Yeah that's some oneitis shit, I know how you feel, shit like that can bring out some strong emotions in both of you. You will get over it eventually. But for now, just ride it out, chill out and try not to think about it too much. After a while, go out with your buddies and have fun, just do some stuff and get back in the groove. After a while you'll probably forget about her, and you can start hooking up with other girls and everything.
But seriously. kudos to you, that was awesome LOL and sorry if I seem insensitive
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Post by amarok on Sept 20, 2011 15:08:45 GMT -5
Adam's right, the choice is yours. If you really like her maybe try the long distance. At least then if it doesn't work out, at least you can say you tried. You didn't just give up.
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bballphenom
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Post by bballphenom on Sept 20, 2011 18:01:15 GMT -5
Fuck no I'm not doing long distance relationship, never works out. And thank for all the advice.
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perceverance
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Post by perceverance on Sept 20, 2011 20:39:02 GMT -5
being able to express your feelings as well, thats what makes you a real man to the core. no not really.. The poem was okay ey, maybe when spoken its more deep .. Change is good though, and you got laid, nice whatever u say bro |
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Post by looknlisten on Sept 20, 2011 23:56:36 GMT -5
Expressing your feelings when you want to is cool, doesn't make you a real man to the core though. It sounds right, for chicks. If you were asked in class today what makes you a real man to the core, well I dunno. Whatever you say captain
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infamous93
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Post by infamous93 on Sept 21, 2011 22:59:20 GMT -5
Just to clairfy it I said it sucks about his situation not the poem the poem was good, my bad ;D
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