jae
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Registered: Dec 15, 2011 0:24:33 GMT -5
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Post by jae on Feb 4, 2012 4:34:20 GMT -5
This is my review of it:
Awesome.
It is inspiring, diverse and Tucker Max entertaining. It's just great. I especially liked Contempt's and Sloth's, after reading those two my dick grew four inches.
My only criticism is I can't find anything to criticise.
Keep up the good work
-Jaedon Blackest Rich
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Post by Eastcoast on Feb 4, 2012 12:22:31 GMT -5
Thanks man really appreciate it, if anyone else has feedback help me out, we need to make it the best it can be.
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Post by looknlisten on Feb 4, 2012 16:12:38 GMT -5
The writing is weak, nothing that would make me wanna check it everyday for new content or a fresh perspective. All of you are individuals and all of you are attractive in your own way. Got a good system of pick up but not so good way of teaching. Too much fluff talking in the writing just put out the lethal stuff even if it means the article is only a paragraph. The writing is pretty good for a guy that's never read any pickup in his life, if that's who your targeting then its a good site, fair enough. Good luck
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Post by canadiankid on Feb 5, 2012 3:02:52 GMT -5
Go fuck yourself slater. You don't always need to be an asshole. You said your piece in a post. I couldn't give to fucks if it helps you, its guys like Jae I want to help jae: thanks man! Its good to hear it helps!
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Post by looknlisten on Feb 5, 2012 9:08:32 GMT -5
Haha exactly, thank goodness I don't need your help though. My writing helps a lot of guys, even if they hate reading my shit and hate seeing my name I still show the light. I help all that need help. Your helping guys in a way that will not make them winners so I don't really care, your growing an army of "natural" teenagers that bearly get women. Look at adam as an example, I remember that dude when his name was still "Super1Up" the way he was learning here he didn't stand a chance now his gone. You guys learned under grape, prodigy, ohm andrew and such and adam learned off you, contempt and such. You leave the winners behind, if I were you guys I would ask womanizer to write a small article, you'll see what I'm talking about. Dude knows what his doing. Don't know what the fuck you running but it is not good and I'm done your just wasting eastcoasts time acting like your doing something new. Put up good shit as a standard, for winners, or leave it.
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Post by NorwegianDJ on Feb 5, 2012 9:48:25 GMT -5
Good criticism, deal with it canadiankid. The only thing I dislike about slater is a lack of paragraphs. Personally, I'm not focusing on the site right now unless told otherwise. I'd love to write some lethal stuff, but I feel uninspired. I'll definitely write some quality stuff in the future!
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Michal
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Registered: Oct 11, 2011 9:37:23 GMT -5
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Post by Michal on Feb 5, 2012 11:13:28 GMT -5
Wow slater,I've never thought you are such fan of me... You can be main cheerleader what do you think about it?! naah just joking. Okey now to topic... I don't want to be that idiot and coward which is just complaining about work of others ,but yeah slater is right. I read nearly all of your articles on new site but never all. It was boring and just talking about things like orange is orange,apple is red...cmon girl give me your head... You need to have system in your writing,not just changing writers. For example make 4 weeks in month : 1. Self education (how to be alpha,how to be natural,inner game and so on) 2. Know your enemy ( Articles about girls, about their hearts,thoughts.Know how,to understand them) 3. Game your enemy ( Articles about kino,IOI's and other bullshit) 4. and this week there will be field reports ,sex reports. You know just bonuses for kids. Every friday you can make some extra article about things like SEX,High School,Kissing and this shit,because most of boys which will go to this page NEVER EVER kissed a girl...they are still virgins. And you are writing them how to became popstar. What the hell?! Imagine you as someone which is in 3rd or this shit year on highschool(sorry don't know American education) they are being bullied,or they are shy and so on and you write them about how to get 10's... Okey I just wanted to say this. and last thing-> CanadianKid stop acting like girl with so many emotions . This is -> Forum <- which means everyone is writing their opinion deal with it or be quiet but never insult someone. \,,/ peace
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Post by canadiankid on Feb 5, 2012 12:26:35 GMT -5
I'm cool with CONSTRUCTIVE critisicm, in fact I love it. Just stating the writing is weak an acting like your better than everyone is bullshit.
When it is stated explicitly why you dislike what's written, that's good. Such as what you said about missing those first few steps for the guys who have never kissed someone. Restating the post you made just calling us shit is pointless and that is not the kind of attitude a successful person has.
As a little side story: When I first got into PU, I thought getting girls would solve my problems. It was something all the guys I wanted to be like had in common. So I started out and I got a little success but none of it stuck. It still felt empty. So I tried to get more girls, and it almost became an obsession. Needless to say my efforts were for naught, and I was unsuccessful. Then I started on inner game. That actually made me feel GOOD about myself, which was more than anything what I was looking for. Now to say you want to help winners is fine, but I want to help guys who ARE just like I WAS. To be brutally honest, I was not a winner. But now I am. You say we're turning them into guys who barely get girls. I beg to differ. I banged 7 different girls last semester, putting me in the top 5% of all college students in north America. That's what I want these guys to be able to do if that's what they choose to do, and if they put the effort in, they can. I want them to have sex with those girls because that's what they want, not because they are seeking validation. If you are the best you can be, then you will be able to get the best.
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Post by looknlisten on Feb 5, 2012 13:15:30 GMT -5
Haha your banging girls but the shit you putting out sucks. I said you guys have a good system of pickup, no doubt you guys are getting girls and attract in your own way iv said that already.. I said your helping them in a way that will NOT make them winners. I don't get you, I speak about the guys that aren't getting results and you speak about yourself ? Again your still saying "I want the guys to do their homework" dude its not gonna make them win. Put up better shit tell them what you did to put yourself in the 5% don't tell them an apple is red, and some apples are green but if you have confidence you can eat any apple haha whatever I'm done doesn't matter
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Michal
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Registered: Oct 11, 2011 9:37:23 GMT -5
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Post by Michal on Feb 5, 2012 14:10:19 GMT -5
^^
Sorry man but you just totally misunderstood what we've written. Anyways peace.
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Post by looknlisten on Feb 5, 2012 15:03:17 GMT -5
Ohk just read my first comment I stand by it - the content is weak nothing more to it, what they have going for them is a good pikcup system poor teaching system though. Look at it like this, the best teachers at your school are not the ones who know everything and fancy methods, they are the ones who can teach YOU well, who can get what they know across to YOU and that's all I'm saying. I don't care about the rest - 5% apples assholes story time what not, don't care, just put up good shit.
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Michal
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Registered: Oct 11, 2011 9:37:23 GMT -5
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Post by Michal on Feb 5, 2012 16:07:41 GMT -5
Slater im smiting you to death! in good meaning ofc
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Parkwhore
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G-Eazy is my shit.
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Registered: May 15, 2011 21:15:59 GMT -5
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Post by Parkwhore on Feb 5, 2012 18:12:58 GMT -5
Slater maybe you could offer some suggestions rather than just saying how bad it is.
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Post by Sloth on Feb 5, 2012 19:09:57 GMT -5
at the end of the day we're helping guys regardless, and i know this because they go out of their way to thank me and message me. So slater get off your high horse and leave if you don't like the methods we're teaching. Game is SUBJECTIVE, so you itting on your throne and repeteadly putting other peoples articles down is just ignorant, and extremely ironic seeing as you can't even write in coherent style. Criticism is giving us examples of weak points and how to improve and what sshould be written instead
NOT saying completely ambiguous bullshit like 'ah mun ya need to give the people what they need at the begining not the end, you teaching dudes to be natural winners but all you really teaching is how to be winners and get no girls because you not breaking them down to the core ahhhhh me so omniscient you so stupid mannnn' and i'm sitting there, reading your comments (slater) thinking, what the fuck is this guy actually trying to say?
I'm quite confident in my writing ability thanks, constructive criticism is welcome, yours is not.
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Post by looknlisten on Feb 5, 2012 22:19:29 GMT -5
Cool
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