Secret adn Coco (espin)

[secret]

desguapo: hey cutie
*** Waiting for totalblonde625 to connect
*** totalblonde625's IC window is open
totalblonde625: heyy
desguapo: wat up
totalblonde625: nothin much you??
desguapo: im luring girls to my house with candy which do u prefer skittles or M&M's? =P
totalblonde625: skittles :]
totalblonde625: lol
desguapo: lol taste the rainbow
totalblonde625: of course
desguapo: XD usually when ppl say nothing there usully casuing trouble, r u casuing troble?
desguapo: =P
desguapo: ill tke the silence as a yes =P
totalblonde625: never
desguapo: lol that niot convincing does someone need a time out =P
totalblonde625: no i've been good. lol
desguapo: if u say so tho i think uve been naughty =P
totalblonde625: no i dont think so
desguapo: come sit on santa lap and tell him want for christmas XD
totalblonde625: lets see here...
totalblonde625: lo
totalblonde625: lol
desguapo: lol
desguapo: woah woah woah slow down with that list i cant read it all
desguapo: =P
totalblonde625: haha i no im askin for just too much this year
desguapo: how bout instad of all that a simmple kiss
desguapo: *** Kissing ***
desguapo: XD
totalblonde625: maybe haha thank you :]
desguapo: so i tke it ur the good girl in ur grp of friends
totalblonde625: actually i am
totalblonde625: no lie
desguapo: lol look im a mind reader =P
totalblonde625: i see that
totalblonde625: lol
desguapo: so i cnt belive u hvent introduced urself to me i feel so offended =P
totalblonde625: ok well im emily to start off
totalblonde625: lol
desguapo: lol well emily pleassure to meet
totalblonde625: good to meet you too
desguapo: lol my friends call me Secret
totalblonde625: why??
desguapo: so tell me boutr urself lol that a story ill tell u if u rly been a good girl =P
desguapo: XD
totalblonde625: ok well what do you wanna know??
desguapo: anything and everything =P
totalblonde625: im almost 16.
totalblonde625: nothin else really
desguapo: lol that a horriable introduction ur fired =P
totalblonde625: ok fine then
totalblonde625: lol
desguapo: ur hobbies intrest, sports u play etc
desguapo: XD
totalblonde625: lacrosse, field hockey, cheerleading
totalblonde625: thats about it
desguapo: ok lol better ur still fired tho =P
totalblonde625: why?? cause i didnt tell you! fine lmao
desguapo: lol u took to long =P as ur manager i need quick results but well see maybe ill hire u again
desguapo: u can be santa helper =P
totalblonde625: ok then
totalblonde625: thats good
desguapo: lol do u hve msger? aim/yahoo/msn?
totalblonde625: aim
desguapo: wat is it this huge window is tking alot od space on my comp =P
totalblonde625: haha ok
desguapo: so wat is it?
totalblonde625: xoxemilylv
desguapo: r u online
totalblonde625: hold on im signing on
desguapo: lol
desguapo: ur fired again for being slow =P
totalblonde625: im a slow typer! lol
desguapo: lol i hope u txt quicker lol
totalblonde625: i actually can i text insanly fast
desguapo: ok lol well i msged u
totalblonde625: ok m just waiting for i now
desguapo: ur waiting for wat
totalblonde625: nothin
desguapo: lol
desguapo: lol nvr ill just msg u here ur lucky i like u if not i would make u txt me =P
totalblonde625: i did text you but my phone is really slow
totalblonde625: lol
desguapo: lol so u cheerlead right do u like it
totalblonde625: yeaa i love it
desguapo: that kool
totalblonde625: yeaa
desguapo: no hobbies nthing
totalblonde625: singing thats about it
desguapo: that kool i used to sig when i was like 10 =P
totalblonde625: haha well i do it in a band
desguapo: oh that kool i play violin and drums
totalblonde625: flute, guitar, drums, and dependin on the song keyboard
totalblonde625: lol
desguapo: damn lol i can somewat play the guitar but i stopped a few yrs ago
totalblonde625: how come??
desguapo: no the same passion for it like i used to
totalblonde625: oh...
desguapo: yea so i think uve been good so imm tell u how i got my name
totalblonde625: ok
totalblonde625: :]
desguapo: =P
desguapo: im a magician so i needed a sdage name and i cldnt think of anything so my cuz wanted to know some magic secrets and io wldnt tell him so he called me secret casue i wldnt reveal them
totalblonde625: oh thats a cool way to get a name. my fiends just call me cheyy cause its my middle name lol
desguapo: i dnt like chey im gonna call u Coco =P
totalblonde625: haha why coco?? lol
desguapo: casue it was my dog name..... dnt worry i love my dog =P
totalblonde625: ok lol
desguapo: so Coco can u usually be lure to ppl house with candy or was it my iressistable charm =P
totalblonde625: idk what it was. i think it was the skittles. lol
desguapo: lol
desguapo: do u know were ft meade is?
desguapo: fort*
totalblonde625: yeaa
desguapo: how far is it from u?
totalblonde625: life 30 minutes
totalblonde625: like*
desguapo: oh ok
totalblonde625: yeaa
desguapo: tho id luv to continue to jharass u on espin i hve to go babysit im gonnabe away from my comp bt if u want u can giv eme ur number and we can txt
desguapo: =P
totalblonde625: ok it 410-865-****
desguapo: im ptting u under Coco =P
totalblonde625: haha ok then
desguapo: il send u a txt now
totalblonde625: ok
desguapo: alright i tcxted u
desguapo: txted sry cant speel
totalblonde625: i got it
desguapo: spell lol
totalblonde625: spell??
desguapo: nvr mind lol bye ill txt u
totalblonde625: ok bye

feedback much appreciated =P

[SenorBubbz]

Nice. Good job on the number close.

But remember, the same amount of time it takes her to message you is how long you should wait. She'll pick up on the pattern and start messaging you back faster.

[optimus]

Good job. Is that number legit?

The part where you're talking about hobbies and stuff was kinda boring and I felt like you telegraphed too much interest by asking "ur hobbies intrest, sports u play etc"

And don't offer to tell her why you're called secret, if she's interested, she'll ask you.

[secret]

yea the number legit i was txting her when i got off for a little while still calling her Coco =P do u hve any ideas on how to make those quetions seem fun?

[optimus]

Then you should probably take it down.

Usually, I just run a story and she'll do the same, but you could try something like this:

totalblonde625: ok well what do you wanna know??
How should I know what's interesting in your life? Here, I'll help you out: This one time at swim practice...
HB: Actually I don't swim I cheerlead.
etc...

I've never feild tested it, but it sure sounds good.

[secret]

that sounds good man thanx for the hlp im gonna try it, i know that line only works for the scenario but in general try and make it more hilarious