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[amarok]

This is alright. You started off really boring. I don't ever start an online conversation with just "hey". Nor do I ever say "you good?". Either combine them or come up with something more interesting. Also, work on your grammar. A lot of your sentences come out somewhat incoherent, just like she herself said. Next, the vibe of conversation seems very much of you pushing her into talking. Give her something and let her balance the conversation. Lastly, when you said "oh well? can't you say anything else?" it came off as nearly attacking her. Nobody likes that. If you want to call her out for a boring response, do it in a better way. I lied, one more point. You brought up dancing then went into sex. Why? You gave it no purpose. What you should have done is tied it to the two of you together. I get your intent: you're trying to sexualize the conversation, but you failed because it didn't involve anyone but her and "someone". You need to explicitly make it about you and her.

[Logic]

This is actually a lot better than most guys so props. With that being said you pushed way too long on the topic of sex and dancing hoping it would eventually go somewhere.. If one thing is working drop it and move on.. Amarok already said it but I am going to again just to emphasize it, you need to make it obviously about you and her. You didn't and it ended up in some awkward in between stage where it was sexual but in a forced way. Also you can just skip the intro. When she said "stop talking incoherently" she was referring to how confused she was emotionally by whether you meant to make a sexual vibe between you two or just being funny. Sack up and make it obvious

Other than that I second everything Amarok said